1.the boy swept through the hot scorching sand.
2.he swam like a swan  quickly running away. 
3. We finally Reached the Island and saw the white smooth sand i was so excited about seeing the  palm trees the fish.
4.the young boy dashed across the hot scorching white smooth sand.
5. The children wrote in the smooth  white sand.
6. The  the little children walked upon the rocky grey rocks to find great treasure. 

 
Hi my name is Ivan and I am new at this school. l like the story that you wrote and i like your blog.
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