1.the boy swept through the hot scorching sand.
2.he swam like a swan quickly running away.
3. We finally Reached the Island and saw the white smooth sand i was so excited about seeing the palm trees the fish.
4.the young boy dashed across the hot scorching white smooth sand.
5. The children wrote in the smooth white sand.
6. The the little children walked upon the rocky grey rocks to find great treasure.
Hi my name is Ivan and I am new at this school. l like the story that you wrote and i like your blog.
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