week 3 writing

Hi Zion-li from Room 22 this is my Writing enjoy

.Water began to puddle at her feet. Like a bucket of water. She thought she was going to get sucked in to the umbrella she thinks its magical but really she is just dreaming she had a magical umbrella.The Big white fluffy clouds. And rain drops the size as your hand so big.The sky is dark but suddenly it went bright as a shiny car when some one just washes a car in the sun.