Wednesday, 21 August 2019

Show not tell sentences

Ariella-Brooke felt Happy:
show: Ariella's mouth opened wider then a vampire smiling at some one when really he wants to suck her blood.



Rachael felt shocked:
show: Rachael's eyes widened like someone opening there mouth to eat.And hearts Racing like a toy train.



Ava felt sad:

show: Ava's face tilted in on the side and cried with her eyes closed and she was swimming in her own tears.




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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous23 August 2019 at 10:21

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    1. Anonymous29 August 2019 at 10:26

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