Sir Edmund Hillary sick sentences.

The man walked up the slope. He used poles. The sun was bright. The sky was blue. He looked forward to the view from the top

sick sentences Not showing just telling.

1.strutting up  the icy cold winter snow walking miles and miles.
2 He walked with freezing grey icy poles that were frozen and every time it dug in to the snow it grew to go deeper and deeper.
3 The bright yellow and orange peachy sun rose up from the Horizon making me feel flushed.
4 Breath taking gazing up at the bright baby blue sky
5 He looked forward gazed up the most beautiful thing he had ever seen in his life he feels like he has it all