Book Week

Hi I'm Zion-li from Room 22.

I wasn't  any thing but I wish I was Hermione from Harry Potter.

It is a girl she is very smart and a Wizard. 

I found book week fun when we have to stop drop and read and how we have to dress up on Friday.

My favorite book is the Dog Man series i've  Read 3 of his books. lots of people dressed up as Harry Potter.

Sick sentences Dame Valerie Adams

These are Sick Sentences
I flew threw the air. Their were people watching from the stands. I hit the ground



Here are my new sentences.


Quickly throwing my black shot put and shifting it higher and higher until I finally threw it as high as I can and seeing me winning. Thousands of people observing Dame Valerie Adams throwing her big black shot put. Solidly hitting the hard floor with yellow sand and making the win of the night.

Show not tell sentences

Ariella-Brooke felt Happy:
show: Ariella's mouth opened wider then a vampire smiling at some one when really he wants to suck her blood.



Rachael felt shocked:
show: Rachael's eyes widened like someone opening there mouth to eat.And hearts Racing like a toy train.



Ava felt sad:

show: Ava's face tilted in on the side and cried with her eyes closed and she was swimming in her own tears.

Sir Edmund Hillary sick sentences.

The man walked up the slope. He used poles. The sun was bright. The sky was blue. He looked forward to the view from the top

sick sentences Not showing just telling.

1.strutting up  the icy cold winter snow walking miles and miles.
2 He walked with freezing grey icy poles that were frozen and every time it dug in to the snow it grew to go deeper and deeper.
3 The bright yellow and orange peachy sun rose up from the Horizon making me feel flushed.
4 Breath taking gazing up at the bright baby blue sky
5 He looked forward gazed up the most beautiful thing he had ever seen in his life he feels like he has it all

Edmund Hillary Timeline

Hi I'm Zion-LI from Room 22 This is my Sir Edmund Hillary timeline

sir Edmund Hillary

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Sir Edmond Hillary writing

Gazing up, feeling speechless, we observed the bottom of the biggest Mountain in the world. Feeling overjoyed but being taken over by a nerves we stare at the  Mountain in awe.  I feel like I just want to give up already but I know It will be worth the risk my life, But I will be the first person to ever lay a foot on Mount Everest.


 We were only half way we felt like by every step I dug deeper, deeper into the freezing cold snow. We had dinner frozen baked beans and there was a snow storm. I had stitches which felt so bad but I put up with it and carried on walking, walking ,walking. I was so tired and so hungry, desperate for nice hot food.



 Finally I reach the top of Mount Everest. We felt the breeze on our face and enjoyed the couple of moments of time to take in the swift air and relax for a few minutes. Then started to travel down the mountain. Full of joy and a wish to help schools and hospitals.

Saturn

My bird genially

Movies

Hi my name is I Zion welcome to my blog  and this post is about The civic Theater in town we watched 14 short films my favorite is the cave men one because it showed lots of animals and I love animals so much and its cute how the cave men built a big shelter for the all of  the animals to stay in while A storm is going on That's why I liked that one the most. https://drive.google.com/file/d/1bcoUd6ndH3fzb13NwoQ9u4PxJeNZbKbZ/view?ts=5d422f76